Thursday, April 11, 2013

Persuasive Writing

I Believe that Goldilocks has sinned against the Bears.

Firstly, She broke into the bears house. Goldilocks  is bad bit is because against the law. She trespassed into someone house that she doesn't that in the own.

Secondly, She used things without asking and broke things. She doesn't own anything that in the house. She couldn't afford things she broke.

Thirdly, She left when they came home. She didn't ask for forgiveness. She didn't clean her mess when she broke their stuff and didn't say sorry.

I believe that Goldilocks should go to jail. She should have payed for all of the things she broke.